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V. Barrett

That night she danced around the fires, remembering the 
way he 

looked ,the softness of his lips, the way his hands 
felt running

along her body.

dancing faster, envisioning his eyes as she begged 
the gods 

to bring him back to her. In her mind she knew it 
was wrong,

but in her heart she ached for him so. She knew that 

needed his love to survive. No matter the 

he was her only desire. Faster, faster dancing 

building and raising the energy, higher and higher,

until all at once she dropped to her knees, 
releasing the 

energy. she raised her face to the light of the full 

Tears streaming down her face, into the darkness she

screamed out his name.

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