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TL Taylor

Total utter darkness;

excepting the myriad of crimson.

As though somehow your mind

was cut

with a million shards of glass.

And the emptiness rages on and on…

The sound of silence echoes deep

into the reaches of your sub consciousness.

The bittersweet flavor of depression is delightful!

Is it NOT?

Just knowing someone else

can be optimistic,

when your world is so bleak

makes you realize

how completely alone you really are.

But you cannot surrender.

For if you do, you are



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