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The Web Surfer
I was at the mall, eating a burger and fries from Burger King, when a computer attacked me! The computer, that came from a famous computer store, wrapped a cord around me. It pulled me toward it. When I was right by it, the computer pulled out a sword from inside it. Then a man’s face appeared on the computer screen. The man on the computer screen said, “I hate you! You have defeated all the criminals that I have sent out to destroy you! The reason why I want to destroy you is that you like to read books! I hate reading; the only thing that I read is stuff that is on the computer! Now, it’s time for you to face the ultimate evil, me; the web surfer! The sword came towards me, but I took out a mini blaster. I aimed the mini blaster at the sword and fired! A laser hit the sword and then it exploded! All of a sudden, the web surfer yelled, “You’re coming with me to cyber space!”
All of a sudden, the computer and the web surfer’s face disappeared. Then after a few seconds, I started to disappear! After I disappeared, I got sent to cyber space. I got sent straight to my (older) homepage. When I got to my homepage, I landed on top of a story. Soon, Web Surfer appeared right by me; with his whole body this time. He was holding a sword. He raised the sword toward me, walked toward me with his sword poised in the air. I stepped farther back and I fell! I landed right on top of a poll. Web Surfer jumped off the story and landed on the poll. He raised his sword and swung it towards me. I dodged out of the way and sent a punch flying in his direction. My fist hit him in the head and Web Surfer got knocked out.
Then I grabbed him and jumped out of the computer! When we went out of the computer, we landed in Web Surfer’s headquarters. Web Surfer poised his sword in the air and said, “Are you ready for a sword fight? Well, I don’t care if you are ready for a sword fight. We will have a sword fight anyways”, He pulled out a sword out ofrom thin air and gave it too me. Web Surfer continued, “Now, it’s time too fight!” Web Surfer swung his sword at me, but I blocked it. I swung my sword, not at him; I swung it at a giant sized computer. The computer fell on top of Web Surfer, but after it fell on him; the computer exploded!
When Web Surfer stood up, he said, “Now it’s time too show you my full power!
What caused that explosion was just one of my powers”. He put his sword down,
raised his right hand, and a bright red light came out of it!
After escaping from jail, Web Surfer and the giant bat went to a metal cloud, that somehow floated in the sky. On the metal cloud, was a large computer shaped building that was created by Web Surfer. Web Surfer got to the cloud by riding on the giant bat. When they landed, they walked into the building. Inside the building they saw a lot of villains. “SnorrelBaster, come here”, said Web Surfer. SnorrelBaster walked up to Web Surfer. SnorrelBaster was a fat green ogre that was 6 ft. SnorrelBaster can easily change his size. “What do you want, sir?” said SnorrelBaster. “I want you too go and destroy Schuylar!” said Web Surfer. “Yes, Master”, said SnorrelBaster.
SnorrelBaster flew the giant bat all the way to my school. The giant bat landed
by the door of my school. SnorrelBaster got off the giant bat and opened the
door. He walked inside and saw me walking to Choir. He grabbed me and pulled me
outside. When I was outside, he changed his size to 50 ft! He brought his foot
down, but I jumped out of the way. When I was out of the way, I jumped real high
and landed on the ogre’s nose. I took off my shoes and stuffed them into his
nostrils. When stuff is in ogre’s nostrils, they turn back to their normal size.
The ogre returned to his normal size and yelled, “We will get you!” Then the
ogre jumped on top of the giant bat and it flew away, back towards the building
on the cloud.
The zit chased me out of the bathroom. I ran towards the door. When I got outside, the zit came out after me. I turned around and brought out a mini blaster from my pocket. I aimed the blaster at the zit and fired! A red light came out; hit the zit, and then the zit exploded! Now all I had too do was destroy the book. I got into my plane and flew towards the excavation site. On the way there, my plane started to make weird noises; then my plane fell and landed on the ground. I got out of the plane, turned around, and saw a group of zombies heading towards me! I took out a mega sized blaster from my plane, aimed it at the zombies and fired! A green light came out; hit the zombies, and the zombies exploded! I took an emergency jetpack from my plane, put it on, and flew towards the excavation site. When I landed, by the excavation site, I saw the book. I ran towards the book, but I wasn’t the only one running towards the book, SKLG was! The reason why SKLG wanted the book because he heard that the book would gave any villain that grabbed it lots of power! I jumped forward, picked up the book, aimed a mini blaster at it, and then fired! A red light came out, hit the book, and then it exploded. After that; I put on my jetpack and flew away, towards home. After I left; SKLG yelled, “I will get you, Schuylar!”
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