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Train of Thought

by

Rusty Broadspear

This is between the two of us……..



Echoing cacophony; ‘twas a busy station

Continuous plumes of steam

Caused a ground fog

Cutting the crowds off at the knees.

Smiles so rare, fury was frequent.

An engine shrieked it’s departure

Then with rhythmic woofs

It clanked and chuffed into motion.

Old Mother Engine,

Her family duly followed.



So let’s sit on the bench by the café…..



A female arm waved a scarf

To a soul within the jelly of folk.

Someone ran alongside

Brandishing a brolly, a case and a paper

His coat flapped

Young lads wearing spats, clapped

And then he fell,

His case slid off the platform

Under the wheels.

He’d missed his train.



So, please love, explain what’s changed…..



A black porter pushed a trolley,

His uniform was incomplete,

Minus hat, coat unbuttoned.

Luggage ready to spill.

Two urchins sat dangle legged

On the front.

The porter whistled and smiled.

Is that possible?

The urchins dismounted, ran off

With a suitcase each in hand.



But we are still so steeped in love……



The porter didn’t notice.

A man in a bowler

Threw a bicycle on top of his load.

He saluted the man

Whistling and smiling.

The whole caboogle disappeared

Into the soupy maelstrom.

Two coppers strolled by

Whistles at the ready,

They were talking football.



So therefore, let’s take the train together……..



So many station announcements,

Like bird song in the countryside,

Highs and lows, intermittent,

Background noise. Pipe tobacco

With sweet perfumes and body odour

Terminated an unwelcome ambience.

Pigeons in the lofty rafters

Lived their lives, dived for crumbs,

Looked down mockingly

Whilst perching and roosting.



Such a sad moment to stay with us both forever……….



Dark glasses, white stick, beard,

Grey shirt, dinner jacket, crooked bow tie,

Tattered trousers, rubber toeless boots,

Pushing a perambulator

Filled with untold cheapness,

Trailing an evil odour,

Held a sign, that read,

‘I saved you, now you save me’

A young woman burdened with belongings,

Offered a halfpenny – he took it.



I bow to your wonderment and wise words…….



A table nearby held two businessmen,

Or doctors or foreigners in politics.

They were joined by a lady

And her entourage, and they stood

And kissed her, ordered her a tea.

She welcomed their attention.

She was beautiful ‘neath so much rouge.

Their talk was drowned

With knowing looks.

Papers passed between them.



I accept your decision, your carriage awaits,

I will carry your luggage

And see you aboard

For not only am I your lover……………

I am your driver.

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