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Outshining The Sun


Kendra Hughes

When I look into the sky what do I see
Gods beautiful face shining back at me
My mind says yes,
he has come
He looks at me and
Outshines the sun
His powerful arms open with pride
Reaching toward me
Me, reaching toward the sky
I know he is saying come with me
For I will not let you fall
into the sea
I look at him once more with a smile on my face
I say yes lord I have come to take my place.

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