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Is suicide painless?
by
Kelsey M
My mother will be so dissapointed in me, I thought as I tried to come up with
another solution. "Just do it, she does not control your life. Now do it before
I do it for you" demanded Mrs.Tash. There was no way around it...Not this time.
"Its been to long!"..Stop yelling..I can't take this..I can't take the yelling!
They are the controlling ones, not mother...Never mother.
Yet it happened before it could be stopped. I watched as he left the world, the
world that resented him. I watched as he fell into the splintering rope it
rapping around his smooth neck. I watched as his face turned lovely shades of
blues and purples, sparkling tears glittering his beautiful cheeks. I watched
his ocean colored eyes fading into the world of the forgotten. I watched his
mother enter the room and scream in heart ache. Then it was over and I died. I
died that day in her closet.
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