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Paradise Found

by 

Karen Pospisil

Shower with me in the water of spring
let the blossoms fragrance our bath.
The warmth of the sun will dry us
as we run naked along the path
that leads us to bliss, to paradise found,
a forever of love and delight.
Lay with me, play with me here on the ground
until day reaches into the night.
Then love with me, stay with me here by my side,
a promise that lasts for all time.
I give you my body to have as your own,
you give me yours to be mine.....

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