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Nothing Better

by

Josh Richey

When I'm with her I can't picture heaven being any better,
Being with her there's nothing better.
Her skin is as smooth as silk,
Touching her there's nothing better.
Her lips are as soft as rose petals,
Kissing her there's nothing better.
But, the day I lost her everything was better.

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