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Joanna Rozo

About to fall
but you held me up.
And finally i knew what happiness was.
Then you left and i cried,
knowing that all that was left was for me to die.
The knife touched my wrist,
The pills so close to my mouth.
After a few months i felt okay.
Now i am better than ever.
Happier and stronger.
It took a taste of death to save me.
Something only you could do.
Thank you, for everything.
Thank you for those passionate nights.
Thank you for the best months of my life.
Thank you for putting up with me.
Thank you for breaking my heart, nearly killing me.
Now i am well, i wish you were too.
What hurts the most,
is i couldnt save you.

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