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The Things I am Wondering


Jessica Dawn Clingempeel

Jesus died on a cross
yes I am aware
But the way he died I ask myself
Was it really fair?
He hung there on a cross only by nails
If he didn't do it like this would this have meant he have failed
What people think about this world is just one big lie
And now their deeds has made the Lord Jesus cry.
It isn't about beauty or the colors of your hair
It is about a king who died and left his love to share.
Now I sit in school learning about evolution
Why make books like this when the bible is the solution?
Look at the people these days who thinks they are the best
But the real truth is they are no better than the rest.
Why can't Jesus just come back and start this world again?
Because that is what everyone needs is Jesus, our friend.

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