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( A Letter to Jesus about the War)


Jessica Dawn Clingempeel

Look at the ones who doesn't play fair
Look at the cowards who stands and stares
Look at the children who just lost their mom and dad
Look at the world which is really sad
Look at the soldier who saved lives
Look at the soldier who just died
Look at the ones willing to fight
Look at the ones who are going to give their life
Look at the rules that are broken
Listen to the words that are spoken
Look at me I am not ready to die
Look at me I am still alive!
Look at me I believe
Look at me I am free
Look at yourself and the ones who love you
Look at yourself you were the crown
Look at yourself you can still be found
Look at the ones who still needs to be saved
Please Lord look I pray.
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