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Don’t Call Tonight
She breathed a sigh of relief when she flipped the switch and all the lights
She hoped she did it right. What would Peter say if she didn’t? Probably he
wouldn't say anything, not really. He would wait for a quiet moment in the
afternoon of Christmas day and fix them the way they should be.
The lanterns along the driveway cast bright colored patches on the snow and the
little bubble lights strung around the maple tree sparkled in the cold wind.
Funny how these lights mean so much in war time. What would Christmas be like
without them ... gloomy. Oh, so gloomy.
He was gone four months now and she was six months along, and Oh – how she
longed to see him again. She couldn’t bear to spend this Christmas alone – with
the baby due. Maybe the lights would bring him home – although he said not to
expect it. At least six months, he said. That meant late in February. She’d be
in her final month then. Too close, Peter, too close.
But nevertheless, she got a tree – a small one, and the man was kind enough to
tie it up and put it on the roof of the car. Even though the doctor told her to
be careful lifting anything, she risked carrying it into the house and
decorating it all by herself. She was good at that, better even than Peter was.
She made yards and yards of popcorn and cranberries. They hadn’t been married
long enough to accumulate many ornaments, so she made most of them herself. Gold
paper, glue and scissors and a cut-out angel for the top. “If you could see it,
Peter! You’d be so proud of me.”
She was going through the day in her mind. She was sure if he couldn’t make it
by Christmas day he would call. What was the time in Iraq? How many hours ahead
– was it ten? She couldn’t remember. But if the phone did ring ...! Suppose it
rang now ... would she have the courage to pick it up? It’s bad enough to spend
Christmas without him.
“But I’d have to pick it up ... there’s no one here to do it for me.”
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