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Unlucky in Love


Frank Blacharczyk

Unforgiven but still in love

Out of control I caused you harm

I slipped fell down bruised and then I saw God

but he pushed me back only to help me up

When the fog cleared I looked back to see the damage done

All the doors began to shut I knocked and no one answered

No one believed me that I had changed

But the past was too soon my heart deflated like a pierced balloon

unforgiven but still in love

You tell me itís alright forgotten but nothing changes

A friendly handshake a tense hug carefully chosen pauses

But I am still waiting to change in a heartbeat

when you call my name like you did before

a shelter from my storm

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