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Thoughts Of An Ending Relationship

by

Elizabeth Jones

Tribute: Matthew James Moffler

Why couldn't we be together?
Why couldn't we make it last?
We promised to marry each other.
You just couldn't leave things in the past.

You were to busy to talk to me,
But if she called you would answer the phone.
I gave in to your every need.
No matter how much you sweet talked me, I always felt alone.

You always said you would call right back,
I cried so many nights for you just to care,
I guess honesty isn't the only thing you lack.
No matter how many tears I shed, you still weren't there.

The one time I needed you, you were drunk.
Maybe I was fooling myself all the time.
My heart is a ship that you just sunk.
I thought you would always be mine.

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