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it’s 1:00 a.m. and i’m up again
thoughts of her cross my mind
i think to myself…naw
she couldn’t be up….not at this time

remembering….before i went to bed
i wanted to call her
just to say goodnight
but…that wouldn’t be right

truth is…i want to talk to her
right now
to share how i really feel
but….it’s 1:00 a.m.

i’m suppose to be sleep
having sweet dreams
instead i’m having sweet thoughts
….of her

and me
sharing intimate conversation
on our way to estacy
but….it’s 1:00 a.m.

and i’m up again
wondering…does she
feel the same as i do
could she be up thinking about me too?

at 1:00 a.m.

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