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Chantel Rasmussen

All this emotion,
all this pain,
with everything going on,
it's just too hard to explain,
I feel hurt,
and confused,
I feel lost,
and used,
my mind is spinning,
I feel so dizzy,
my evil is winning,
it's sickening me,
I want to close my eyes,
and wish everything away,
the way it should stay,
but my dad won't agree,
he never really does,
he never listens to me,
he says I'm "too young,"
but that's not true,
I know what's going on,
I know what to do,
but he already said I'm "too young"
as a "child" I see all,
I know all,
and keep all to myself,
'cause nobody believes I can help,
listen to your children,
when they give advice,
'cause it may be the best,
that you'll get in your life.

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