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Thin Air

by

Cesar A. Miranda

Feel I suffocate,
I canít breathe, canít feel the air,
I canít see, canít find myself,
Iíve lost my mind, my self,
Nothing is important now,
In my own world now I live,
A world of sickness, sadness, pain,
No one wants me, no one cares,
They say crazy I am,
Lonely, left behind,
Now trapped here I am,
Unconscious, out of my mind.

Into thin air Iíve fallen with myself,
Canít find an exit,
I have failed,
I stand up only to fall again,
No blood just pain running through my veins,
Trapped in my own fears, not being myself again,
Iíve failed.

Desperate I am,
No exit or a spot,
Where I can try to find my peace,
Find a cure or a relief,
Canít rest, canít close my eyes,
The whole world disappears,
Vanishes in front of me,
Is just me, myself and I.

No one can understand me how I feel,
No one can help me find my peace,
No one can take me out of this pain,
No one can get through this thin air.

Into thin air, Iíve fallen with myself,
Canít find an exit, I have failed,
I stand up only to fall again,
My past condemns me, in my fears Iím caught,
These walls surround me, my life is done,
I wonít be myself again anymore,
Iíve failed.

Into thin air Iíve fallen with myself,
Canít find a way out of this pain,
I wonít get my life back, or either be myself again,
Iíve failed.

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