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Deep Feelings

by 

Ashley Robinson 

if only you knew the pain i feel the love i have for you is so real
people say it will go away in time i dont think so 
i believe its some kind of sign

i think i could be with you forever but with your thinking it more like never
you say you just want to be friends 
but thinking of me that way for you is some kind of sin


if only you knew the pain i feel inside i think you would have feelings
for me of some kind
i dont want nobody else just you i will be there for you through and through 


you say you want someone who will treat you good look before i would
for you i would honestly lie down and die you wouldn't believe the times
i think of you and cry


i sit and think day by day you're too precious to hurt in any wayyour smile is as beautiful as a day of sunshine and your eyes are as
pretty as the stars that shine


there will never be another love so true than the love i have for you

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