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Amanda Wagner

I dont care if you know this, but i think your great. Im not sure if you want to know this but i think your F***** up. I care that you left me and that you were so good to me. Im not sure if you've noticed but Im better than her. I'm not blond, I dont work and I might not be as pretty. But I am better then her. I dont know if you know this but you were my first love. I dont care if you havent noticed how many times I wanted to say " I love you"

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