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The Playground


Abby K.

“Hi!” I yelled across the school yard
“Wanna come and play?”
convincing it was getting hard
“Come on... you must have something to say!”

It continued walking
simply wagging its tail
then it started barking
then broke into a wail

I ran over to it
just to have a look and see
but when I went past the sand pit
I saw that it was only Freddy T.

“I thought you were a dog!”
he seemed confused at that
“Maybe it was just a fog,
like in Pluto’s Space Attack!”

Then I quickly ran back to the slide
over all the tire and hay
then I saw the dog’s spotted hide!
“Wanna come and play?”

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