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Heidi
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 6:00 pm    Post subject: Ummm, poetry? Reply with quote

Hey Matt, dkneip what is this last set of stuff you guys wrote? No offense but this is a group poem and well, if you want to talk about fingers in salad and such go put it in the free forum.
Don't want to sound mean but I was just confused. Sorry if I come off a bit too strong, well that's all for now.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 7:46 pm    Post subject: o Reply with quote

Heidi, you've written an entire stanza. Powerful addition young lady. But your including my name in your lines for the poem has me a bit concerned. Is that legal without my permission?
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 8:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A poem is a poem.. and whether it is funny, sad, odd or different, it doesn't matter because it is what it is.. you can make your line whatever you want it to be.. but I think we may have 25 lines.. so now we may be able to start our next group poem.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 11:10 am    Post subject: Apologies Reply with quote

Anyway, the poem was for the youth, so I apologize for having posted lines. I'm an old man and I'll keep my face out of your poems.

Keep working gang.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 3:51 pm    Post subject: oh boy Reply with quote

I'll let Matt speak for me on those issues as well.. and I'll add this:

if it wasn't for me and matt, that poem would take another five months to reach 25 lines.

And honestly, I didn't think anyone was taking it so seriously. Don't necessarily condemn "the finger in my salad" as a dismembered body part, Heidi. There are other impressions would one receive from that line, if they wanted to. Think about it! Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 12:18 pm    Post subject: woops Reply with quote

mattt wrote:
and i'm lost in grammar about which person it is


Ahh woops, now i get it.




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