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PostPosted: Mon Oct 11, 2004 12:36 pm    Post subject: Group poem.. read on for more info. Reply with quote

Ok I thought it would be fun to make a group poem it will consist of 25 lines...

I'll start it and the next person will add on another line to it and so on... Later when we have about 25 lines I'll end it if it doesn't seem ended and then I'll post it all together.


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Dark dreams and silver wishes,
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 6:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 7:44 pm    Post subject: Poem Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky
A girl stares at herself in the mirror
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 6:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 2:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
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~Life is like a flower, beautiful.~

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 17, 2004 2:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 12:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 05, 2005 12:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
Or the crest of a falling star,
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

she trys to catch the pieces before they slip into the abyss[/img]
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 11:45 pm    Post subject: poem Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
Or the crest of a falling star,she trys
to catch the pieces before they slip into the abyss[/img]
and the man's too old to add to the poem.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 7:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
Or the crest of a falling star,she trys
to catch the pieces before they slip into the abyss[/img]
and the man's too old to add to the poem
Words of beauty she longs to hear,
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 5:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Angela MacRae wrote:
Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
Or the crest of a falling star,she trys
to catch the pieces before they slip into the abyss[/img]
and the man's too old to add to the poem
Words of beauty she longs to hear,

crescent moon and fallen tear,
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 10:47 am    Post subject: 867 530 ni-i-n, Jenny Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
Or the crest of a falling star,she trys
to catch the pieces before they slip into the abyss[/img]
and the man's too old to add to the poem
Words of beauty she longs to hear,
crescent moon and fallen tear,
more quickly was the man old toiling in slow imagery,
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 11:19 pm    Post subject: more Reply with quote

for all the stasis more quickly aging
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
Or the crest of a falling star,she trys
to catch the pieces before they slip into the abyss
and the man's too old to add to the poem
Words of beauty she longs to hear,
crescent moon and fallen tear,
more quickly was the man old toiling in slow imagery,
for all the stasis more quickly aging,
a more voracious mind is raging,
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 11:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

dkneip wrote:
Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
Or the crest of a falling star,she trys
to catch the pieces before they slip into the abyss
and the man's too old to add to the poem
Words of beauty she longs to hear,
crescent moon and fallen tear,
more quickly was the man old toiling in slow imagery,
for all the stasis more quickly aging,
a more voracious mind is raging,


For all the world just keeps on changing,
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 7:46 pm    Post subject: duh Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
Or the crest of a falling star,she trys
to catch the pieces before they slip into the abyss
and the man's too old to add to the poem
Words of beauty she longs to hear,
crescent moon and fallen tear,
more quickly was the man old toiling in slow imagery,
for all the stasis more quickly aging,
a more voracious mind is raging,
and wouldn't have rhymed like that if not in excuses and regressing
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 4:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

maybe ...

"A more voracious mind rampaging" ?
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dark dreams and silver wishes,
Crimson tides reflect auburn sky,
A girl stares at herself in the mirror,
Emerald wisps of falcate eye,
Broken hearts and hopes that die,
Her weathered hopes uncovered,
blossom in the light of day.
The vein of an unassuming leaf,
Or the crest of a falling star,she trys
to catch the pieces before they slip into the abyss
and the man's too old to add to the poem
Words of beauty she longs to hear,
crescent moon and fallen tear,
more quickly was the old man toiling in slow imagery,
for all the stasis more quickly aging,
a more voracious mind was raging,
For all the world just keeps on changing,
and wouldn't have rhymed like that if not in excuses and regressing,
maybe..
but she weeps her losses all the same,
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 7:38 pm    Post subject: group poem Reply with quote

as if anyone who cared ever came.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 6:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

There's a finger in my salad
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 7:26 pm    Post subject: yea Reply with quote

smaller than that in my brain.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 11:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

just the thought and i turn pallid
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 4:10 pm    Post subject: p Reply with quote

and i'm lost in grammar about which person it is
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