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nightrenn
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 11:14 am    Post subject: Fallen Reply with quote

critic as much as you want, and dont spare feelings or anything. your criticism will only make it better. i also take compliments X)

The angel runs,
Wingless silent,
Alone in her world,
She is for the summer,
The one that never came-
The one that never will.

It is just a photo,
Lost and fallen,
Found by me,
Me-
Now lost in the print,
Leave me wander.
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