- The Writers Voice -

[Heidi]

I would put the title in the subject line but I can't remember it. I just wanted to say it was good. I could picture the scene with the solider riding back not wanting to believe his hand is gone. The other characters are memorable too. I can imagine the blonde taking her turn with each person, imagine them playing in some club in New York.
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[Harry]

Thank you Heidi. It's written as a monologue with an author's comment at the end an old technique from O'Henry.