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A Hypocrite, That's All

by

Chaya Anavi

they say she has some courage 
to tell such a tale 
to reveal such a secret 
except one detail 
that she's never been on the ledge 
never experienced the fall 
thinks she's got enough to bawl 
but down there 
she's never been at all 

she translates a horror into something lyrical 
of someone all alone and beaten down 
but how is she alone if now they know it all 
of her courage they are now so proud 
i simply find it hypocritical 
to mock such a perilous experience 
she's never been on the ledge 
it possesses no past tense 
she's never been there 
she's never been there at all 

do you fancy this so mysterious 
have you not heard of real gore 
i do not understand all the fuss 
over someone who is a liar 
the ledge is no where near 
the way it's been described 
once you've actually been there 
there is no chance to be revived 

all these false tears she sheds 
they come not from the ledge 
they come not from the fall 
her story tells of the solitude and fear 
yet she takes comfort in them all 
she's never been there 
the place she speaks of 
it is not black, white, or clear 
thinks she went through so much 
but she's never been there at all

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